I wait, hoping for hope, as I always do. Waiting each time and every time. Even as the pattern gets monotonous, I know I would have it no other way. If I rush, it goes wrong faster, this much is clear. Yet do I take my time, it seems I merely get closer to my goal, before I lose it anyway. Oh shush! Whining, wailing! Never do any good. World moves on, and so must I. |
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Flicking through a notebook I carry in my pocket, I found this. I'm not entirely sure what I was thinking when I wrote it, though several things do spring to mind. It does give me strangest of sensations when I read it though. I'm not sure it really classes as poetry, but I feel it has some kind of flow and sonority to it, so I've given it minimal editing, largely typographical in nature, and posted it here.
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I wish I were a glow worm,
A glow worm is never glum,
Because how could you be unhappy
When the sun shines out your bum?
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"If you believe you can or you cannot, you will be correct" - Henry Ford.
I wasn't sure about parts of the wording, but I didn't want to play with it too much just yet.
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"If you believe you can or you cannot, you will be correct" - Henry Ford.
(Definitely poetry!)
I'd fave it right away, but I'm featuring a great poem/song by *DaveJeanes called Maybe Not. I'm no guitarist but I'd say he has an interesting technique...in general, that is...I haven't heard this one.
But yeah, nice one! Something's bugging me..."Yet do I take my time..." "...do..."? Is that East Anglian?
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Believe me, you're better off not thinking about my
I live on Free Rice.
Thanks, I really wasn't sure about this one.
Er, no, it's not really anything, I just like to add in word here and there, or substitute words, that make my work sound "nearly wrong". I don't know why, it just creates an effect that I really like. You reckon it take a toll here?
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"If you believe you can or you cannot, you will be correct" - Henry Ford.
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"If you believe you can or you cannot, you will be correct" - Henry Ford.
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Believe me, you're better off not thinking about my
I live on Free Rice.
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"If you believe you can or you cannot, you will be correct" - Henry Ford.
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